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Posted 11 October 2012 - 08:40 PM

Well I have been bored in recent days and adding to this story bit by bit. This is pretty much going from Black Souls - Night Lords - Slaanesh Conversion.

For the first part I didn't add in a Chapter name or name of characters as I got writers block and really couldn't be arsed to think of names at the time.
Also this isn't that great so don't expect the work of Ragtag in here =P Also be gently as it is the first time I have really writing anything and if it suffers ridicule that isn't just some criticism to say what I could do to improve I will pretty much just remove it from here and return it to the Silent Shadow.
Enough of me talking about random crap. Here is my story written from boredom =)


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Tales of Dx
Prelude


Dx was one of the few remaining from an old warband that plagued the Imperium for many years. They were the Black Souls. The Black Souls were created a long time before dx and when he joined them he joined as a low level recruit who was eager to prove his worth to his Lord. Dx was found as a lone Astartes wondered by himself. He didn't care for the Imperium or Chaos at that time.

He was a astartes made by a Chapter that wished for him to begin a great new life where he would become a strong and capable warrior who could prove himself worth in the eyes of the God Emperor. Dx didn't always see eye to eye with the Chapter about issues and beliefs. Dx never truly accepted the God Emperor as a God and when he joined he had to talk an Oath to prove that he would be worth and up hold the ideals of the chapter. With so many rules and ideals with Dx having to live up to eventually made he angry with the part of the chapter he was assigned to. Dx one day while doing a cleansing of a small Ork horde hoping to plunder a local world nearby the Chapter's recruitment worlds. While fighting Dx felt a presence that felt eerie and strange. Strange but good. When the fighting starting with the Orks they were fodder and Orks fell by the 10s and hundreds. Soon they overwhelmed their position and Dx was forced to fight in close combat with them. Dx pulled out his combat blade and fought a bloody battle.

Soon the presence fell over him again which made him feel stronger, faster and over all better. He believed that this must have been the God Emperor. Nothing else could make him feel this way. He soon killed all the Orks with his battle brothers but Dx still felt the battle raging through his head and continued to attack anything that resembled a foe. Soon one of his battle brothers got in the way trying to stop Dx from advancing. The battle brother had caught the combat knife that had become a quite worn a jaggered from the Ork bones that Dx's knife had craved through. It caught his battle brother's weak point on his shoulder guard which cut all the way through a hit through his Astartes's body. Knowing it wouldn't be explainable to his captain. Dx quitely and quickly kill his former battle brother and hid his body so that he could try to make it to a nearby Thunderhawk which he could use to escape from the Imperium and so that he could survive. But Dx couldn't escape fast enough so he lied so that they would believe that his former battle brother would have been lost on the planet when the Orks ravaged it.

Dx went to see the Chaplain to talk about this situation and see if what happened on the battlefield was the work of the Emperor. After he confessed all that he wanted too. He didn't say anything about the voice he heard within his head as he had heard of no space marines that had heard a voice that told them what they wanted to hear. The chaplain heard all and said that it was the Emperor who guided his blade and allowed him to battle the Imperium's foes with a zeal that only a true son of the Emperor could achieve.

Within a few more battles against the remaining Orks Dx felt the power return. Whenever he was out of the battlefields he felt himself weaker, powerless and depressed. Soon he found himself almost begging his Commanders to put him into every battle he could. He feared that the bloodthirsty and battle searching unnerving within his chapter.

Dx while in his last battle for the Imperium he realised that the voice inside his head was not that of the Emperor. The final battle was against a warband that was trying to conquer a planet close to the Warp so that Abbadon could spread his Black Crusade so the Chaos Legions could easily spread there corruption through the Galaxy. This was a mass coordinated strike against many different worlds close to the Warp. Dx's chapter was isolated and other chapters would spent a time trying to get back to the front so they could protect their precious Imperium's borders.

Dx fought with zeal but soon his chapter started to get overwhelmed. The warband's head sorcerer came with the troops for an awe inspiring victory. Dx was in a squad with 5 other men who all fought with all their heart and might but were slowly falling. Soon it was Dx left and the Head Sorcerer wanted to do the killing himself. When the Sorcerer came he noticed the presence of another. The sorcerer questioned Dx about it and tried to corrupt him but Dx used this to his advantage and came closer to him until he could use his Chainsword and cut the sorcerer's head straight off. The other Chaos Marines were told to retreat and tell the other parts of their warband to leave him but they can slaughter this world and any who are on it.

Dx knew that they wouldn't let him leave so he pulled back and during the confusion of the battle Dx killed the guard of a Thunderhawk and made an immediate escape from the planet where he went into a region of Imperial space which was not attacked often and had little defence against enemies.

A few years after being hunted by Imperial Assassins which wanted to hunt him down for turning on the Emperor. Dx had been alone just with a voice that followed him whenever he wasn't in battle so Dx searched for the battle where ever he could. Soon after going across Imperial space for some weeks he almost escaped the Imperial Assassins until he came into contact with the Black Souls. Dx had an incoming transmission from the Black Souls. It was from Lord Siddicus commander of the Black Souls who was asking why Imperial ships were chasing him. Every moment Dx had to choose he words wisely as each time he speaks he plays roulette with his life. Eventually after a few minutes Dx noticed a boarding party coming along to kill Dx. This made Dx uneasy. He prepared as well as he could. The voice in his head silenced as the battle approached. Hidden in a darkened area and when the Black Souls boarded Dx waited till all of them were off there boarding ship. Dx charged into the back two. He killed them within a few seconds of fighting.

The other Black Souls heard the screams of their comrades dying and turned around to take Dx on. Dx noticed them charging at him. He quickly picked up the fallen Black Souls chainsword and threw it into the unsuspecting Black Souls chest. It threw him down to the ground unable to breathe. Dx continued to kill the others he killed the other one but the last seemed to be a sergeant of the men. He had some combat experience who could take on a more experienced Astartes like Dx. Dx relished a chance to face a worthy challenger so he took time in this battle soon he had stopped sizing up his enemy. He took on his opponent head on and a battle in which chainswords grinded off one another.

Soon both were tiring from the battle. Dx when he started to feel like stopping the voice came back and enraged Dx saying he wasn't good enough to say he shouldn't even be alive if he can't even beat a single opponent in battle. It gave him that burst of energy he charged with a new zeal which made him feel alive to a new level. He ripped the Black soul in half and then recieved a message from the Black Souls. Lord Siddicus saw that Dx had some true power and that he wasn't another weakling. He offered amnesty to Dx so and he could eventually make him join the Black Souls.

It didn't take much convincing for Dx to join them. He would be a low level recruits but when he joined he felt as one of them. There were little rules. He just needed to respect authority of the people higher than him and just kill the lapdogs when ever battle came. Dx did all he could when the Black Souls allowed him to join. He felt as if he could speak openly about the voice but he still kept it too himself. He didn't want to make it sound like he was destined for greatness or just insane and could risk the squad he was put in.

Soon he was a part of the Warband. He fought all the time whenever someone was needed for an assault Dx was the first offer his services. Some saw this as a bad thing and that Dx was just sucking up and wanting to be made a higher part of a warband. Still none of this disrupted Dx from being part of Siddicus's warband. Soon he became a valued member of the warband. Being involved in the Honour Guard of Siddicus, leading the assault of many battles but soon the death of the Black Souls was at hand.
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Death of the Black Souls


Dx knew what was happening with the warband. All of us knew but no one would say a thing about it. Black Souls were dying off in every battle, every skirmish and even when travelling with some of the Black Souls disappearing by taking Thunderhawks away and trying to find refuge else where.

Dx still stood by Siddicus when things seemed most grim. The Black Souls were knocked down to only about 100 men and about 30 of them were Chaos Marines the rest were Guardsmen who turned from the Emperor and willingly gave themselves to Chaos. It was about to be the fall of the Black Souls.

While travelling en route to a gathering of Chaos Warbands which were going to do a mass coordinated strike in a sector of Imperial Space the Black Souls saw a mostly undefended Forge World which was rich with plunder which the Black Souls could easily take and escape from before the Imperium could respond. Lord Siddicus knew he would have to be fast, precise and careful of every move.

Lord Siddicus also wondered why a Forge World this close to the borders was undefended by a Space Marine Chapter. He knew he could miss this opportunity to raid a manufactorum and replenish the warbands ammo and weapons. Which since the last few battles they were running low on.

Some tried to explain that it must be a trap why else would it be undefended? Too late we found it too be a trap. Only when we had entered the Manufactorum and had only killed a handful of Guardsmen did we see from the sky drop pods of the Iron Guardians falling coming towards the Black Souls fast. Siddicus ordered everyone to take what they could and move to a defensive location where we could hold off the Iron Guardians until air support arrived to lift them and take us back.

Within minutes the Black Souls had set up a quick defence. Some of guardsmen planted Auto Cannons, Lascannons and Heavy Bolters to try to halt the Iron Guardians Space Marines but they didn't do anything but kill a few and made the Iron Guardians slow down slightly. Dx knew we would need some kind of saviour from somewhere but the Black Souls had no allies, no one to look out for and they were alone and going to be slaughtered. This did nothing but enrage Dx. Knowing he was going to die all because Chaos couldn't work together. As soon as Dx has these thoughts the voice came back. Taunting him, putting him down but with an outburst of the silence Dx Shouted "No! We will show these bastards that we are the dominate ones in the Galaxy!"

With that outbursts the Black Souls encouraged to stand firm, to kill any and all who stood before them. The Iron Guardians underestimated the Black Souls strength. They assumed that they would have only a few soldiers left but little did they know that some Imperial Guardsmen defending the planet had seen the Iron Guardians using them as bait that the God Emperor had abandoned them and begged to join up with the Black Souls. With an extra 100 Guardsmen all with the know how of the weapon store locations and most defended locations they were well dug in.

Soon the Iron Guardians were ambushed from the sides by Lasgun fire it didn't do much but they were used as distractions allowing the Chaos Marines more chance of survival. Soon when the Guardsmen were all dead they made it past their carcasses and prepared to fight the Black Souls Chaos Marines. Through the vox Dx heard the Thunderhawks would be a few more minutes.

He shouted out to his men telling them to hold these bastards back for a few more minutes and then we can leave this rock and escape. Soon over the horizon of the Iron Guardians lines Dx saw Dreadnoughts incoming. Some Lascannons were still supporting their brothers in the field. Dx ordered them to aim for the Heavy support that the Iron Guardians had deployed. With a loud screech the Lascannon lit up the Dreadnought causing a massive explosion in the rear of the Iron Guardians ranks.

Soon a few minutes were up and still no sign of the Thunderhawks. His men failing to hold back the tide of Iron Guardians Dx order to fall back. Soon Siddicus had seen the Iron Guardians charging with all their might straight at him and his men. They took cover and heard the roaring engines of the Thunderhawks. Soon the field became insane with bodies of Space Marines flying through the air. From where Dx was stood he could see some of the Space Marines falling back and knew the rest would.

He ordered the Thunderhawks to land at their original landing site about half a mile away. The Black Souls moved as fast as they could. Carrying various ammo and weapons they could use in the future. They made it to the Thunderhawks and made immediate take off. The Iron Guardians had expected this and had set up Predators to shoot them down when they took off. Five Thunderhawks came but only two made it out.

With the ambush over and the Black souls escaped there was less than 10 Chaos Marines left. Dx wondered where we would go now. They were no longer a threat. They needed to recover the Gene-seed of their fallen brethren but to go back would be suicide. Siddicus ordered the remaining Black Souls to escape going to any place they could as long as it wasn't Imperial Space.

This is where the Black Souls met the Night Lords.
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Rebirth



Dx and Siddicus took the last of the Black Souls across the stars. Travelling to the Warp. The Warp seemed safe and no chance of Imperials searching for a small warband when large legions were preparing for large invasion and diversions to push the Loyalists back so they can invade Hive Worlds, forge worlds and other Planets which the Imperium held dear or ones that the Chaos Gods could use for Daemon Worlds. As it turns out they didn't expect other Warbands who weren't powerful enough for raiding of planets and travel ships. They saw the Black Souls crippled beyond repair and weren't long for the Universe.

The Black Souls noticed a number of ships closing in on them. They had recently stolen a large amount of weapons and ammo from the Forge World in which most of their forces were destroyed. Soon a small Warband called the Blood Disciples came to rip the last of the Black Souls limb from limb.

Soon battle engulfed the Black Souls last ship but the Blood Disciples were small as well only a couple of ships were there. Firing costanltly. Black Souls had a desperate chance of victory. Siddicus was willing to do anything to save himself and his closest Chaos Marines. They did a quick breach. Send off a few distraction Thunderhawks. The Blood Disciples focused on some of the Thunderhawks but the Black Souls get through. Siddicus and his honour guard took to the command bridge of the Blood Disciples ship.

Soon the Blood Disciples ripped apart the Black Souls last ship. Siddicus saw his ship exploding. He was enraged about it. That ship had been his flagship for so many years, now was split in two and destroyed. Siddicus vowed revenge for his flagship.

The Blood Disciples didn't realise the Black Souls inside their ship. They were too focused on the kill at hand. The other Thunderhawks blown open and the Flagship destroyed. The Blood Disciples were less ready for battle now. They were through this battle and preparing for their next.

Siddicus waiting inside a part of the ship that was unused. Anyone who came along was quickly and quietly killed then hidden out of sight. Soon the ship went through the Warp. It had reached its destination. It was preparing for another raid. This time on a ship known as "Silent Shadow.

The Blood Disciples prepared to strike upon the Night Lords without them knowing. Once they appeared the Night Lords were quickly taken by surprise and quickly defended their precious "Silent Shadow".

The Black Souls knew this was their time to strike. They silently went through the Blood Disciples who were too busy with the Night Lords to be patrolling the ship. Soon the Black Souls with minimal resistance had reached the bridge. It had a large figure in the middle shouting orders to the crew and telling them what to do. Siddicus shouted "You shall pay for your strike upon my ship!" The Blood Disciples commander responded calmly with "We shall see. If you were so eager to leave your ship how can you be a good leader! Leaving your men to die! You should have stayed with them and died with your ship!" As soon as those words fell from his mouth Siddicus charged down covered by the Black Souls and took the commander from his command deck. This had a considerable notice on the battle with the Night Lords. They soon stopped manoeuvring, firing at strategic locations and stopping Night Lord breaches into the hull of their ship.

Siddicus pulled out his Chain Axe a loud rev echoed through the Bridge and prepared to cut the Blood Disciple limb from limb. Dx did as he knew he would have to. He covered Siddicus from Crew and Chaos Marines who could turn the balance of the battle. Some weren't equipped for a close combat fight only have combat knives and chain blades. The Black Souls had been preparing for a while. They had taken the best of their weapons. Power swords, Relics from past ages which were preparing to serve their masters once more in the field of battle, A lighting claw in the hands of one of the Black Souls spread fear among the Crew which made them pause in fear while the Black Souls felt none of this. They went straight into the fight, killing without mercy. Some screamed "WHERE IS YOUR GOD NOW!" and various other insults to these Khornate Worshippers.

Soon the Bridge was littered with bodies from both Black Souls and Blood Disciples. The Night Lords had reached the bridge just to see the Blood Disciples commander's body ripped open and hanging from the top of the room, dripping a pool of Blood below it.

The commander of the Night Lords was one who went by the name of Joker, he was impressed that the Black Souls had done with. He was also annoyed that they had stolen the glory and vengeance that was rightfully theirs for the unprovoked attack upon the "Silent Shadow".

Siddicus asked to see his leader. A Talon Lord, who went by the name of Othrim. Othrim was grateful for the assistance against the Blood Disciples. The Black Souls saved the Silent Shadow from serious damage by removing the crew of the bridge. He asked them what they were going to do now. Siddicus thought upon the words he was asked. If he said he was going to move then how would he. Nothing remained. All ships gone, too few Black Souls and only a few remained. He asked if there was anyway they could join the Night Lords.

Othrim didn't know what to say. He couldn't outright accept anyone who asked. He put them through some trials to see if they were right for the "Night Lords". They endured a weeks of constant training. Most was the usual Space Marine training Dx had received not so long ago when he was recruited into the Space Marines of his Homeworld but Othrim had one last trial. It was to show how dedicated they were to him. He had a Marine who would pretend to go crazy and try to kill Othrim. Othrim knew it was only fake and staged. Siddicus and Dx were with Othrim at the time. Othrim sent a signal to start the trial. Most of the Night Lords went off to their duties. Out of the shadows appeared a Crew member who had a Bolt Pistol and aimed it at Othrim. Siddicus saw the man but wondered why no one else had but immediately notified Dx where the two of them prepared to stop him.

Dx reached down and took out his Combat Knife while Siddicus covered Othrim from a shot. Siddicus realised this would be a great cover up. Blame the Black Souls and say they were using it as a way to usurp power and take control. Dx threw his Combat blade. It ripped straight through the crewman. But he managed to fire off a few Bolt Pistol rounds before though. They hit Siddicus and wounded him.

Othrim knew something was a miss. Those were live rounds fired at him. They were supposed to be blanks and fired away from him so that he didn't get hit. The Crewman was still alive when Dx's knife was stuck in his arm from where he held the Bolt Pistol. Dx's saw the fear, the pain, the agony the man was in and wondered how that must feel. Dx hadn't felt fear in a long time or a large amount of pain. Othrim raised the man and clenched his fist tighter and shouted at the whelp of a man "Why did you fire upon me?" The man replied with "It was the Black Souls Ma'lord! They want to usurp power from you and proclaim themselves rulers of the ship!" Othrim turned and stared into the eyes of Dx. The thrill still buzzed inside Dx of the recent pain he had just inflicted. Othrim stared into his eyes and saw nothing of any plans to kill him. It wasn't know to Dx or Siddicus at the time that Othrim had once been a Inquisitor of the Inquisition.

He then asked the whelp why would Siddicus have put himself in front of the Bolt rounds for me then? The whelp didn't reply, Othrim said "That says it all then..." He walked a way the whelp expecting to be killed by one of the surrounding crewmen or one of the Night Lords but before he knew what had happened. Othrim looked at Dx and just nodded. Dx ripped the man open. Not many noticed it at the time and just thought of it as a way to show traitors deaths that it would be a slow and painful one but it was more a Slaaneshi worship of some kind.

While this happened the Apothecary Yapay was called for immediately medical attention Bolt wounds. Soon Siddicus made a full recovery after Yapay removed the Bolt wounds from his body and patched him up.

Soon Othrim told them that without their help he could have died and he would be honoured to have some extra Night Lords at his side. But also warned that if they ever crossed him that he would make their deaths as slow and painful as possible.
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Falling




Dx was now a Night Lord. The warriors who have no gods and the fighters who have the most feared warriors in the Galaxy. Where ever they go they were already known to them but from the millennia spent away from planets some thought of the Night Lords as a myth. The idea of a force that would be able to be so horrifying and brutal wasn't something most Imperium worlds like to believe but all that changed when they came into contact with anything from Chaos. Though none were as terrifying as the Night Lords.

The Night Lords appealed to Dx. Dx was on a dark, tainted path of despair and pleasure. Dx was tainted by Slaanesh. Even though he never told anyone he knew something was wrong with him. Even the Sorcerers in the Night Lords knew it though they were few. Joker the head sorcerer knew it and was always a hater of Slaanesh. This caused alarm for Dx as what would happen if they found a tainted marine with the mark of a God on the Silent Shadow.

Soon when the Night Lords were pressing on through the Galaxy they came upon a planet with vile Eldar witches there. Dx had never seen or faced Eldar before in his years as an Astartes. He expected the worst creatures he could but when he reached the world in which the Eldar were on he saw them. Not as vile creatures but similar to humans. He wondered why Humanity would even attack ones such as these. They were beautiful in his mind. He saw perfection. When the order came to annihilate them Dx felt broken. Why would we destroy ones so beautiful, elegant and graceful.

As Dx was in a drop-pod with a few other Night Lords there was still Siddicus as the Talon Lord wanted to keep the survivors of the Black Souls together as they know each and how to stay alive in the field. None of the other Black Souls survivors saw anything wrong. Siddicus did though. Dx was lively and always ready for battle but this time he was resentful the upcoming battle. Siddicus said "Dx! What is wrong? Are you scared of some Xeno bastards!" With a light laughter. Dx responded quietly "Why are we fighting these Xenos? What have they done to us? Siddicus had been a Astartes for so much longer than Dx he didn't know how long Siddicus had been around. In Dx's mind Siddicus could have been alive since the Horus Heresy or even before that but still Siddicus just responded with the blunt answer "They don't deserve to live..."

The words echoed in Dx's head. Perhaps Humanity was scared of the Eldar. They obviously are better in every way to humans. Perhaps fear brought Humanity to this point. Were the Night Lords afraid of the Eldar? All of this confusion running through Dx's head made him question almost everything he had been taught since the moment he was poisoned with Imperial propaganda about why the Emperor and Imperium the only way for the Galaxy and when the Chaos Warbands had told him that Chaos was the only way to survive the Galaxy. Dx wondered if there was another way but when that thought popped up the Drop Pod's doors flew off. The others rushed out but Dx just sat there. Only when Dx was hit on the head by Siddicus saying "Get the fuck out of there Dx!" Did Dx realize the battle had already started and that we had taken the Eldar by surprise.

Dx was pretty much dragged along by Siddicus as he seemed to nothing by himself. Soon they came into contact with Eldar troops making a counter attack and Dx saw the graceful and elegant combat style the Eldar used. Dx just stood in awe at the Eldar. Siddicus jumped over and slashed the Eldar warrior in two then ordered Dx to get his head back in the game and stop question things when he should be killing. Dx starting firing his Stalker Bolter into the Eldar. Killing a few but they were soon upon him and he pulled out his Chainsword. He ripped through one. He had her blood spray out onto his helm. He was in shocked at he had done to these creatures of beauty. He had mutilated them and reduced them to nothing from what was a beautiful creature. Soon when the last of the counter attack was down Siddicus went to see what was bothering Dx so much.

Siddicus questioned why Dx was fighting with such little passion in this fight. Dx simply answered with "They are a better people than us. They didn't search for us to kill us they were just here. Within a moment after Siddicus ripped off Dx's helm and shouted "They are xeno scum who deserve nothing but death!" Dx shocked by the words about such a beautiful race. But then he thought that they could be tricksters and deceivers with there beauty.

Soon the offensive took place again. Siddicus asking Dx if he was all right in this attack. Dx responded with "They are Xenos, they will die Chaos demands it..." Siddicus felt the emotionless words and knew Dx was lying in those words when he said that. When they were charging in to the failing Eldar firing line Dx snapped a couple off with his Stalker. Throughout the last few battles against the Eldar Dx felt nothing but shame, disgust and pain at the fact he had killed so many of these creatures that if there was any other way that he couldn't have killed them he would have searched. The voice that had tormented Dx before when he was within his Loyalist Chapter ranks and Black Souls days returned telling how this was all his fault and that he could have avoided all of this if he did things another way.

As the battle raged the voice kept speaking to him. Telling Dx that he has just slaughtered some of the most beautiful creatures he would ever see. Tears started to roll down his face because of these words. As Dx continued charging he saw a Eldar witch atop a defence who seemed to be commanding the Eldar. She had just slashed a few other Night Lords down and started to organize her defences again. Dx charged at her with his Chainsword raised. He hadn't got a new helm since Siddicus had damaged his from his earlier confrontation where he had been questioning everything.

The Eldar witch must have noticed this that the Chaos Marine named Dx wasn't like the others. Where the other relished in the slaughter Dx felt sorrow and pain. The Eldar did volleys of strikes against Dx. Dx poorly defended against them. The fate of this fight was obvious if Dx kept fighting the way he was. The witch called out to him "Your race will fail as all will!" Dx was overcome with passion at sound of her voice that wasn't a scream of one of her Sisters or Brothers death. He pretty much fell because of the beauty she spoke with. The Witch was so amazed at this Chaos Marine where others would have attacked her with unrelenting force this Marine fell to her voice and was devastated at what he had done and become. Dx respond with his tear filled eyes "Your voice.... it is.... beautiful!"

The witch was also confused at this point with what she was hearing. She still knew that this marine was her enemy and nothing would stop her. Dx still shocked with her beauty and her voice that he was almost paralysed on the floor. She prepared to deliver the killing blow knowing it was either this Chaos marine or Herself.

As she raised her blade high a Chain Axe ripped open her chest. Dx let out a scream in the fact of seeing this creatures so horribly damaged. He instantly lifted the veil of paralyzation and raised to his feet and pushed Siddicus back and grabbed the Witch. Just to gaze at her. The witch just spoke the words "From the moment I saw you I have seen a corruption within you. It is the Dark Prince who you call Slaanesh. You are upon a dark path. Resist it. Resist it for the Galaxy." She then let out a groan of pain and fell lifeless.

Dx said almost nothing on the way back. Only when Siddicus asked "what the hell was all that about?" Dx replied with "We have just slaughtered a group of beautiful creatures, I have learnt I have something corrupting me and I need to find out what it is. Do you know anything about the Dark Prince called Slaanesh?" Siddicus said "I know very little about Slaanesh but if anyone on the Silent Shadow knows anything it would be the sorcerer Joker. Dx emotionlessly Then that is who I am off to see...
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I will add my next bit to this soon. Will first be in Silent Shadow to see what the Night Lords think of it but after it has been in there I will put it here in case someone is bored and decides to read something =)

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 10:33 AM

Thats one bitch ass long story...i liked it

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 02:59 PM

Still not finished. Needs to add on one or two more pieces then I will start writing (If I can be arsed) about now day Nights instead of back in time Night Lords from when I first joined =P

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 03:43 PM

I could read that... Or read all of the Terry Pratchet books ever made in a quicker time...

Either way Im sure its awesome. Im just too lazy, sorry :s

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Posted 12 October 2012 - 03:51 PM

I am also very lazy =D No problem. If you want to read it then read it.... =P

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Posted 26 October 2012 - 01:21 AM

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It was straight after the battle with the Eldar when Dx went straight off to find the sorcerer known as Joker who he had very little contact with since his joining of the Night Lords. He knew very little about him. He knew he disliked all Gods within the Galaxy be they the False Emperor or the Chaos Gods that ruled over the Galaxy and Warp. Dx made haste and saw two Night Lord guards outside of the Sorcerer's room. Dx marched quickly towards the door and prepared to entered the when the Night Lord guards question Dx on why he wanted access to Joker's room. He quickly responded with I need to see Joker on one of the utmost important reasons. Which is? Hastily replied by one of the guards. Dx said it isn't for you to know. The guards gave a stern look and allowed Dx entry to Joker's room but were uneasy about it.

Joker was one of the few sorcerers on the Silent Shadow. The Night Lords disliked worshippers and sorcerers who fell to higher powers but even sorcerers have their uses but were usually shunned by the bulk of the Night Lords.

Dx entered and prepared to announce himself but before he did Joker had already noticed him there. What troubles so that you had to disrupt my studies? Questioned Joker. I wish to discover more about a Chaos God do you have anything that might shed some light on their corruptive touch. Asked Dx. I believe I have, which vile god do you want to know about and why? Joker continued questioning. I believe that as we need to defend ourselves from false Gods we must know them so we can defend ourselves from them. Explained Dx. Good point Dx but we cannot be spreading the corruption of the Chaos Gods, it could awaken something with some of the Night Lords which may corrupt some of them. Responded Joker. Then show me. Quickly responded Dx. Here then take these. Joker passed over a couple of old books about each of the Chaos Gods. Thank you Sorcerer. Dx said and hastily left the room and returned to an area of the Silent Shadow unused.

Dx now studied these books. Each seemed to have a personality. Khorne's seemed to be changing colours of red from a bright redish colour to a dark blood colour and constantly changing colours of blood while the cover was smooth as if it was just made and handed to him.

Tzeentch's book seemed to be a various blues in constant colours Dx didn't even know what to call and the cover always feeling different to how it did just before.

Nurgle's book seemed to be growing fungi and other strange plants on the cover while being a vile coloured green.

Now the book in which Dx just wanted Slaanesh's book. Dx knew the saying To kill, you must know your enemy. Dx quickly read through the bright colours of Purple, yellow and reds which all seemed to make a new colour that no one knew what to call. While reading it Dx read wonders that astonished him knowing that someone could gain this power of being able to gain strength, speed and a feelings that no mortal or Astartes should ever experience. It was forbidden fruit. That tasted so sweet. These books contained very little. A background on the God and how they came to be. Shortly after the reading the four books Dx hastily returned them to Joker while thank the sorcerer for his help.

Now Dx was confused over what he should do. The Eldar witch told him that he must resist the corruption and resist it for the Galaxy but with such wonders Slaanesh was offering how could Dx resist. While the witch died Dx noticed a gem the Eldar witch had and took it as a reminder of what had happened. Dx had little idea of what it was. It could have been an Eldar charm, something the Eldar used to channel their power or something the Eldar just had for some reason unknown. Dx just took it because it felt like it was calling to him.

Soon not to arouse any more suspicion Dx went off to find some of the other Night Lords to rejoice in the battles demise and the Night Lords' glorious victory. The Night Lords were celebrating with trohies from the battle. Some were just a helmet or some armour from the Eldar which the was taken so a Night Lord could show himself as a capable warrior in the battlefield.

Dx when regrouped with his fellow Night Lords cheered and rejoiced. Many Night Lords tried to say who was the best fighter or who was the best in the battle which soon led to the Night Lords having short sparring battles within the training area of the Silent Shadow. Most were evenly matched as is expected of Night Lords but Siddicus wasn't originally a Night Lord. He fought differently to the Night Lords. While they went for the speedy in and out Siddicus was a more slow but sure. While a Night Lord could hit a couple of times with his Chainsword Siddicus could have hit once possibly twice with his Chainaxe. This didn't mean Siddicus was always defeat but that he dodge a couple of hits and then slammed down on the with his practice Chainaxe which would have if real ripped an opponent in half. Dx Also was involved with some practice with duelling with Powersword and Bolters. But this died down with within the next few hours when the Night Lords had duties to attend to.

It wasn't long before the Night Lords would be called to battle again. Did it matter what enemy they fought. They all knew fear. They all knew they would die against the Night Lords but they wouldn't surrender easily. Well sometimes they did. Most times they heard of the Night Lords and believed them to be a myth and no such thing but once they arrived they knew they were doomed with no hope of survival.

The Night Lords were called upon by the Talon Lord to cleanse a planet of corruption from the False Emperor. Its an outer world on the Imperium's borders. It had little defences but still had some Guardsmen about 3 companies and a small chapter of Space Marine belonging to the Desert Devils. This would only take a few weeks or a month at most to break. The Night Lords came in with the usual tactics which was to spread fear across the planet. This world was away from the wars and had been left alone for some time they saw themselves as having great companies of Guardsmen while in actual fact they had become lazy and weren't prepared for a battle let alone a siege of their planet.

The Night Lords quickly move into the planet. Taking out the defences above the planet and send the screams of those who were dying down to the planet through all of the Vox systems that were on the Imperium's crumbling world. When the Night Lords make their descent to the world through Drop Pod to strategic locations where squads of 5-10 would crush any resistance and hold locations deemed valuable. Within minutes of the coordinate strike the planet's defensive forces were crumbling by the Night Lords crashing behind their lines and destroying all of their homes while demoralising the planet to stop everything.

Dx's squad had to take hold of a Air Defence control which if taken would allow for Thunderhawks to fly into this sector of the planet without resistance. Dx's squad moved with rapid speed. Reaching their objective with minimal resistance since raptors had also been deployed to hunt the enemies so now and then the squad fired an occasional bolter round or two but with most of the enemies trying to fall back just to find that they were just running into more Night Lords they just fell and were gunned down. Soon they arrived and destroyed the terminals and controls to the air defences. They reported back to the Silent Shadow and awaited new orders. While awaiting for the orders they were met by a counter offensive from the Desert Devils with about 50 Space Marines which were equipped with Bolters and Melta Guns.

Dx was informed when they were approaching and told the Night Lords to take defensive positions and to hold them off till reinforcements arrived. Dx opened the Vox told the Silent Shadow Enemy counter offensive. 40+ Space Marine requesting back up. A raptor Squad said they were on their way and interrupted Dx before he could report the weapons they had. When Dx was about to say a bolter rounds started to crash around his position.

Dx shouted Night Lords hold them back. Once those words were said a volley of bolters hit the first wave knocking five marines down but the others kept advancing. The Night Lords held them off but while they were scoring some kills they were making their way closer to the Night Lord position. While all this was going on the Vox was alive with chatter from other Night Lord groups. All reporting counter attacks from Space Marines with Guardsmen support. Artillery from Basilisks were raining down behind Dx's position making it impossible for a retreat if it came to that.

Dx shouting into the Vox while in cover Raptors redirect to the enemy Artillery position. The Raptor squad leader confirmed and went after the Guardsmen. Just after receiving conformation from the Raptor squad leader a Space Marine with a Melta fired at Dx. It ripped off part of his armour. The Midnight blue had been replaced with a charred black and seemed not to be there. Dx shouted You melta fucking bastard and let out a fierce punch which seemed to break the Space Marines helmet and sent him back. While the Marine was on the group Dx pulled out his Stalker and fired into the struggling corpse.

Now filled with anger and hatred for his foes once more he continued to fight them. Seeing he was down to four other men he knew they wouldn't last long but at that point Dx noticed the Space Marines were also thinning and had only a few left. Dx saw a Space Marine who must have been in command of this force. That one. There you see he is the squad leader. One of the Night Lords said how can you tell? Because he is bald. Show me a Space Marine commander who isn't bald and I will let you take my position. The Night Lords let out a quick snigger and went back into the fight. The Space Marines went in for a quick final attack onto the five remaining Night Lords. They had expected the Night Lords to be waiting for them but they had taken some cover and before the Desert Devils made it towards them and had planted traps intended to thin their numbers to make it a more even fight. They had used simple wire which would pull the pin from their krak and frag grenades when tripped so they could knock some out. When they had made it up to the Night Lords position they had lost another 10 Space Marines. Only 7 Space marines were there to fight the Night Lords five Astartes but they still had surprise on their side. The Night Lords rushed and managed to take out another three so only four remained while the Night Lords destroy the remnants the Desert Devils counter attack squad leader charged into Dx and started to battle the squad leader.

While Dx had already begun battle long before this Squad leader had he was more than capable to kill him but his armour was scarred and open since the melta had ripped open a hole in his chest which was quite the weak spot. Dx fire a couple of Stalker rounds into the Squad leaders armour and made him recoil from them but didn't do much damage to him but gave Dx enough time to get close enough and start to use his Power Sword to cut the Desert Devil's body apart.

Dx as soon as the battle started had insults thrown at him from the Desert Devil such as I will kill you vile traitor! Dx responded almost as if he was enjoying such conflict Is that how you greet all of your Astarte cousins... Dx said joyfully. I am not your cousin, brother or even a fellow Astarte to you foul Chaos scum Spat the Desert Devil. Very well then, I guess you will not mind if I end this then Spoke Dx as if he wasn't even trying yet while the Chainblade and Powersword clashed.

Dx within a couple of seconds slide his Powersword down and cut the hands off from the Desert Devil. That was painful wasn't it brother? The Desert Devil repeated himself I am not your brother scum! Ah yes you consider yourself.. Better? Stronger? Loyal? all of these things are nothing if you place your beliefs in something that isn't real like your False Emperor thinking he can make you become stronger or reward you for your loyalty. He has been dead for thousands of years yet you still try to keep him alive, that will end soon enough. Dx pulled his Powersword and prepared to deliever the final blow when a Bolt round went through his arm and sent him flailing to the ground. The Desert Devil's Chapter Master had come to the front. This was the first counter attack and prepared to make strikes from here to retake the world and push back the Night Lords. Dx still alive and could hear the Desert Devils speaking.
Chapter Master thank you. I think without you I would have been.. well I don't even want to think about it. The Chapter Master responded by saying it wasn't him it was the Emperor who protected him from the Chaos filth.

Dx was still on the floor and saw a vision of a beautiful creature who appeared and said are in you incredible pain? Dx responded yes.. It feels different to previous pains though. Good responded the mysterious voice. Do you wish to become strong once more. the mysterious voice continued. Yes of course. Dx angrily replied. Would you pay or do anything for it? The mysterious voice continued to prepare its offer. YES. Dx shouted. Even your soul? The mysterious voice said. My soul... what do you mean? Do you mean I would be your puppet or I would have free will until my death? Dx asked. Kind of you will become my warrior within this Warband, fulfil my role here and my presence while I will also bless you with gifts that will allow you to become one of the most powerful warriors in the Galaxy. So what do you say? The mysterious voice awaited Dx's response. Then under these terms I accept and my soul will become yours forever. Dx responded. Good another soul. You have now fallen into the glorious power of Slaanesh. I will heal your wounds and make you powerful again. Slaughter this lapdogs and regroup with your brethren the Galaxy needs to be given pain see to it. The mysterious voice finished. Yes my Master. Dx said with a new found strength.

Dx then rose to his feet his wounds healed and his Powersword now corrupted with a powerful Slaaneshi Daemon which he charged into the Lapdogs and cut the Desert Devil squad command in half and cut the leg off the Chapter Master and then performed a Slaaneshi ritual on the Chapter Master's body to confirm his deal with Slaanesh. Dx also kept their heads as a reminder of this event.

Dx now with this new found power would become a powerful and feared warrior within the Silent Shadow and within the Galaxy.

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Sorry for it being a bit long =P I think I have been writing this for the last couple of hours in which I really should have been sleeping =P

EDIT: Sorry if there are some spelling mistakes but I am a bit tired as it is 2:24AM so I off to sleep =P

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Posted 26 October 2012 - 02:33 PM

my eyes my eyes its to long lol

seriously though dx great read mate keep these stories coming they are quite good
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Posted 26 October 2012 - 03:01 PM

Yes Arioky it is so long ;)

Thanks for reading =)

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Posted 26 October 2012 - 03:02 PM

no prob i enjoy it really gives me somthing to do whilst im in the silver membership part of the warp lol
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Posted 26 October 2012 - 04:04 PM

Well don't worry someone will summon you from the Warp soon. I think we need someone to do the shopping because we are running low on cheesy snacks in the Silent Shadow.

Daemon Prince you have been summoned to... go to Tesco and buy me some food! Do this now or return to the Warp forever! =P

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Posted 26 October 2012 - 04:06 PM

or ..... just hear me out i could bit my hand up your arse and make you my puppet doll and make you do it lol then agian you would like that :)
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Posted 26 October 2012 - 04:11 PM

Slaanesh loves anything and everything. Even Khorne. But the feeling isn't mutual.....

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Posted 26 October 2012 - 04:44 PM

well im back to undivided so everyone fights for me my little puppet
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Posted 26 October 2012 - 04:50 PM

Sex names will get you no where except my bedroom Ariok.

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Posted 30 October 2012 - 06:25 AM

well you live under my floorboards so i guess ill have to lock the weakest board now
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Posted 30 October 2012 - 11:14 AM

Well Othrim has the key to the house so I will just go find that then you can''t hide!

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Posted 31 October 2012 - 04:47 PM

Ah .......... one min then wheres othrim right now i need a certain item
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Posted 31 October 2012 - 05:42 PM

The butterknife of Ariok killing isn't yours!

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